Progress

Last week in class I had to tweak a few minor details in my Big Sean news story. I habitually forget that quotes need their own line. Also, a few of my sentences have awkward phrasing when I try to make the sentence structure too complicated. However, I feel that my Big Sean news story is better than my Snowiest City news story. I learned that I actually love interviewing people, but I need to start using less direct quotes and more paraphrased sentences. Also, I am continually working on setting my quotes up better and better each week.